Hum
You might wanna change the music, or at least add the option to stop it.
You might also wanna use color. Lastly, I think it would be better if you did a FBF animation rather than motion twining.
Hum
You might wanna change the music, or at least add the option to stop it.
You might also wanna use color. Lastly, I think it would be better if you did a FBF animation rather than motion twining.
most of it is in FBF, but thanks anyhow
Sorry
For the blame. Or not.
Voice acting is horrible. And maybe you would liek to have a good plot. And realize that maybe too, leaving one of the clay figures in the background on the camera while it's not suppose to be there might not be a so good idea.
Yeah I know
meh
you could at least, you know... Animate it?
Eh fuck that.
Not bad
If it's really your first flash, then congrats. Still I think you should make it more fluid in the characters movement.
Thanks, and thats what I'm focusing on now.
Humm
You know what would have made it funnier at the end?
Shold have used the Benny Hill theme instead of the actual song :D
no.
Mouais
Animation is ok. Lip sync working good. But the score and FX are quiet annoying. You should ask friends to make voice acts and search on specialized web sites such as sound dogs for FX that are not made with voice, wich would sound way more professional.
Thanks for the tips, it's just not quite my style. I like knowing I made everything in this flash. I'm not going for professionalism. but yeah, thanks for the review.
I loled
Ending was really unsuspected. Good call
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