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[Colour.]

It suprised me. You artistic sense is quite excellent, but I feel you animation technic isn't there just yet. You might want to consider upping your frame rate a little, so as to make you animation a tad more fluid.

larit responds:

Yes, I work on it, but here still an important role is played by material, in my conditions it quickly thaws and from that movement become slightly sharp, in general such animated cartoons should be removed in the cold room, but I have meanwhile no such opportunity, thanks.

[Nighthawks]

Well...

Hum, how to say this?

You've kind of mixed up two decades of US history, but except for this, it's a pretty decent movies.

What I don't really get is how the painting is related to the great gatbsy. What's the connection betweent the two? It was made in the early forties, while the great gatsby was first printed in 1922, two decades earlier. Prohibition was long gone when that canvas was being worked.

Anyway, the animation and voice are pretty good. Keep up the good work!

swanibino responds:

Its really more about the aspect of cheating, and how a person justified cheating in the 1920s. We thought this picture, while not printed in the same decade, paralleled the relationship between Tom and Myrtle in Great Gatsby.

[Boximation]

Hum

You might wanna change the music, or at least add the option to stop it.

You might also wanna use color. Lastly, I think it would be better if you did a FBF animation rather than motion twining.

MasterofStickpplz responds:

most of it is in FBF, but thanks anyhow

[The Fight For The Ticket]

Sorry

For the blame. Or not.

Voice acting is horrible. And maybe you would liek to have a good plot. And realize that maybe too, leaving one of the clay figures in the background on the camera while it's not suppose to be there might not be a so good idea.

angrytape responds:

Yeah I know

[dont mess up with the dog]

well well well

If this is really your first flash work ever, you got quite the idea. You might want to add a more complete storyline, and spend more time on the art to smoothen the animation fluidity.

I only blammed your entry since this is obviously a test to see what you can do and the portal is supposed to be for final works, or at least pretty complete ones.

chiconube responds:

yeah about storyline, i been working on that (not about the dog) but i dont got so much imagination, i mean, i got the idea but i dont know how to improve it, about the art, god! it was horrible doing that! i do it with mouse and mi mouse dont work so well, but thaks god now i got a tablet! and ok i just upload it because i want to see what people say about it, i get sick when my friends and family tell me that its a good animation, cuz common they dont see animations in this page every day! but well thanks for the comment i wiil improve!

[The Adv. of Mark Trail]

meh

you could at least, you know... Animate it?

Topcatyo responds:

Eh fuck that.

[MADNESS Trapped]

Not bad

If it's really your first flash, then congrats. Still I think you should make it more fluid in the characters movement.

ZAchaPi responds:

Thanks, and thats what I'm focusing on now.

[Meteor Alt-ending]

Humm

You know what would have made it funnier at the end?

Shold have used the Benny Hill theme instead of the actual song :D

Doctor-Gordon responds:

no.

[Swish!]

Mouais

Animation is ok. Lip sync working good. But the score and FX are quiet annoying. You should ask friends to make voice acts and search on specialized web sites such as sound dogs for FX that are not made with voice, wich would sound way more professional.

wasserbrunner responds:

Thanks for the tips, it's just not quite my style. I like knowing I made everything in this flash. I'm not going for professionalism. but yeah, thanks for the review.

[Vegeta vs Mario]

I loled

Ending was really unsuspected. Good call

Camron23 responds:

I tend to have a weak spot for random.