Rhesus's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[KarkenHreutz]

Where is the sicle?

Ok, the video is crap. But the song is good. Why don't you submit it via the Audio Portal instead?

[dont mess up with the dog]

well well well

If this is really your first flash work ever, you got quite the idea. You might want to add a more complete storyline, and spend more time on the art to smoothen the animation fluidity.

I only blammed your entry since this is obviously a test to see what you can do and the portal is supposed to be for final works, or at least pretty complete ones.

chiconube responds:

yeah about storyline, i been working on that (not about the dog) but i dont got so much imagination, i mean, i got the idea but i dont know how to improve it, about the art, god! it was horrible doing that! i do it with mouse and mi mouse dont work so well, but thaks god now i got a tablet! and ok i just upload it because i want to see what people say about it, i get sick when my friends and family tell me that its a good animation, cuz common they dont see animations in this page every day! but well thanks for the comment i wiil improve!

[Apple's "BIG" Idea]

Well

1- You gotta learn to use the fill tool.

2- To make a better sun, you might as well want to use gradients.

3- Use them with the fill tool.

4- If you actually had a story or something to say, there would have been a use to submit it here. Not the case though.

5- You could also work on the drawings. Might help.

6- The music is kind of boring after 5 seconds.

Lastly, Apple hasn't re-invented anything. They just gave it a fashion look.

[Reel_2010_ace0fredspades]

Woaw

I stand trully impressed in front of my computer, looking at this amazing use of vectoriql art and colors.

Very impressive work.

[The Foolish Death]

loled

aside from the gun cocking that sounded more likea door being opened or closed, the Joke really got me :D

[(Feel good inc)]

So...

You might want to make his arms move. You know, like humans normaly do. Maybe articulate his feet to. Also, maybe make him do more things than walking.

Lastly, we don't care how old you are. It doesn't mean s**t on the intarwebs. Either you got talent or you don't. I bet a lot of older people aren't able to do what you do in flash (and I probably am one of them). So don't complain ok?

[The Adv. of Mark Trail]

meh

you could at least, you know... Animate it?

Topcatyo responds:

Eh fuck that.

[Carl in the kitchen]

Smoother?

Dude, you should really take more time on your animation, add more frames, so it looks smoother. Ans maybe, find some plte and make a story?

[Fire in the Hole!!]

Meh

Power drinks imitations are over rated. Especialy if your animation isn't well thought and that you message doesn't manke any sense at all.

Go ahead, and submit it on youtube, but plz, don't pollute the portal with this.

PS: Can you make it not to loop. This is pretty annoying.

[Debbie Blues]

Raptor Jesus

And he went extinct for your sins!!!!